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Let's write in English!
Hello,every body!
So,I want to talk with you in english ,because y need to learn it.
Here, we will speak about anything you want,does not matter;which is important is only whrite in enghlish language.I propose to begin with the current subject from TV,namely yhe girl that is going from home,because shi wants to living monastery.I can not believe that this girl,a very good girl,maybe so…what do you think?is it possible?Where is the fault?
Ps. I hope that you will understand anything from my topic…I wait you for corrections
So,I want to talk with you in english ,because y need to learn it.
Here, we will speak about anything you want,does not matter;which is important is only whrite in enghlish language.I propose to begin with the current subject from TV,namely yhe girl that is going from home,because shi wants to living monastery.I can not believe that this girl,a very good girl,maybe so…what do you think?is it possible?Where is the fault?
Ps. I hope that you will understand anything from my topic…I wait you for corrections
Ultima editare efectuata de catre Admina in Dum 08 Feb 2015, 4:21 am, editata de 1 ori (Motiv : modificat titlul)
ismi3ismi- Maestru
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Hello and congratulations for your courage to open this topic! I will not correct your writing because I have studied English at the University and I tend to be a bit too direct and critical. I let the other girls to tell you where you need improvement. I wish good luck in making rapid progresses in English!
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Hi Ismi!
Thank you for starting this topic. I took the liberty to change the title to english.
I don't watch TV, so I'm not up to date with the news. Sorry for not being a better conversation partner.
About your writing I think you could say:
"I want to learn english, so I'm starting this conversation with you all.
In this topic we will discuss about everything wewould like. It's important to write only in english!
Let's begin with the TV news about the girl that wants to leave her home and become a nun in a monastery. Incredible! What do you think? Who is to blame for this?
p.s. I hope you'll understand myformulation writing... please correct me, if it is necessary."
And please, correct me, too! Alice, would you be so kindand to help us?
p.s.s. The changes (marked in red) were made by my husband.
On your initial text, some words were misspelled:
whrite = write
enghlish = english (English)
shi = she
Some expressions:
I want to talk with you in english = I would like to talk to you in English
I propose to begin with = let's begin with
the girl that is going from home = the girl is leaving home, for a monastery
wants to living monastery = wants to live in a monastery
Where is the fault = who's fault is it? or who is to blame?
I wait you for corrections = please correct me, if I'm wrong
p.s.s.s. Sometimes, less is more! It's easier to use less words and some usual expressions.
Thank you for starting this topic. I took the liberty to change the title to english.
I don't watch TV, so I'm not up to date with the news. Sorry for not being a better conversation partner.
About your writing I think you could say:
"I want to learn english, so I'm starting this conversation with you all.
In this topic we will discuss about everything we
Let's begin with the TV news about the girl that wants to leave her home and become a nun in a monastery. Incredible! What do you think? Who is to blame for this?
p.s. I hope you'll understand my
And please, correct me, too! Alice, would you be so kind
p.s.s. The changes (marked in red) were made by my husband.
On your initial text, some words were misspelled:
whrite = write
enghlish = english (English)
shi = she
Some expressions:
I want to talk with you in english = I would like to talk to you in English
I propose to begin with = let's begin with
the girl that is going from home = the girl is leaving home, for a monastery
wants to living monastery = wants to live in a monastery
Where is the fault = who's fault is it? or who is to blame?
I wait you for corrections = please correct me, if I'm wrong
p.s.s.s. Sometimes, less is more! It's easier to use less words and some usual expressions.
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Hi there I said I want this topic too,so here l am
I'dd like to improve my english...and as Ismi suggested,l start by expressing my disagreement with the church attitude....they keep saying that they didn't incouraged the girl to join nuns,and that they didn't offered her shelter in these 4 days.Where else that girl was all this time??
Well ,another problem...is the first time when l hear of such a big pressure media put on police and other authorities for finding this girl.Why this girl,when thousands of children are missing every year?Why media doesn't react in the same way for every missing person?
Ok...l did what l could...now l wait your help
I'dd like to improve my english...and as Ismi suggested,l start by expressing my disagreement with the church attitude....they keep saying that they didn't incouraged the girl to join nuns,and that they didn't offered her shelter in these 4 days.Where else that girl was all this time??
Well ,another problem...is the first time when l hear of such a big pressure media put on police and other authorities for finding this girl.Why this girl,when thousands of children are missing every year?Why media doesn't react in the same way for every missing person?
Ok...l did what l could...now l wait your help
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How old is this girl, you are talking about? I read something about a priest (her confessor), that knew that the girl was leaving, but the parents knew nothing about that. Is it the same story?
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Yes,Admina is the same story.The girl is 15 years old ,and very good student.Good that she's back at her parents....probably many isues needs to be fixed there....
Anyway,good morning ,ladies(and Admina's hubby )
Let's hope today will be a better day for everybody
Anyway,good morning ,ladies(and Admina's hubby )
Let's hope today will be a better day for everybody
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Good morning everyone!
I don't have too much time but I will come back to this topic because I need also myself some corrections!
Have a lovely day !
I don't have too much time but I will come back to this topic because I need also myself some corrections!
Have a lovely day !
danniela- Atotcunoscător
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Oh,my god,but you are beginig yesterday this subject and I see that right now!
Hello,everybody!
Hello,everybody!
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Hi Valentina!
Welcome to our group!!
Welcome to our group!!
danniela- Atotcunoscător
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Heloo everybody!
I would like to talk to you in English!
I would like to talk to you in English!
Gabica- Atotcunoscător
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Welcome to all of us
How are your days going? I'm perfectly fine,i had a great payment day,so now i feel confident and successful,hahaha And later, after 3 hours,i will get my best reward :my zumba fitness hour :D
How are your days going? I'm perfectly fine,i had a great payment day,so now i feel confident and successful,hahaha And later, after 3 hours,i will get my best reward :my zumba fitness hour :D
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I'm happy for you Day!
I will go to aikido. I work hard for my knees.
I will go to aikido. I work hard for my knees.
Gabica- Atotcunoscător
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Day, what means ''I had a great payment day''???
Did you receive some money?
And a small correction if you allow me..... ''I'' is always written with capital letter .
Congrats for zumba classes!!!
Please, if I do any mistake, try to correct me!! I will really appreciate!
Did you receive some money?
And a small correction if you allow me..... ''I'' is always written with capital letter .
Congrats for zumba classes!!!
Please, if I do any mistake, try to correct me!! I will really appreciate!
danniela- Atotcunoscător
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Thanks,Danni I wrote i????Shame on me,it must be the excitement Next time I'll be more carefull .Yes,l received some money from different countries where l sent my jewelry And l am happy for this
Now i just came from Zumba class,the trainer really pushed us hard tonight,with many cardio exercises,and new choreography(I need correction on thins word please)...and I simply loved it (the class,not the trainer...welllllll,he's young and good looking,haha,but i would use HIM not IT,haha)
Now i just came from Zumba class,the trainer really pushed us hard tonight,with many cardio exercises,and new choreography(I need correction on thins word please)...and I simply loved it (the class,not the trainer...welllllll,he's young and good looking,haha,but i would use HIM not IT,haha)
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Hello,hello I'm verry excited ,about this subject and I hope I will join you verry quiqly without any help just with my english by the lake with mud and verry ugly whater. (translate=balta)
Bye,bye I'm work to do,i have to make many sandwices for tomorow lunch of all my familyand to drive my hole new sewing maschine (I but it today),who it wacthing me saddley by her sewing table.I pun on nthe table and it,I don't have time for it yet.Kiss you.
Bye,bye I'm work to do,i have to make many sandwices for tomorow lunch of all my familyand to drive my hole new sewing maschine (I but it today),who it wacthing me saddley by her sewing table.I pun on nthe table and it,I don't have time for it yet.Kiss you.
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I wrote a message in the morning and I forgot to send it. It's so easy in Romanian. Anyway...
Welcome to our group, Daniela, Gabica and Magda!
Ismi, where are you? I hope you'll find the time to chat, this evening.
Day, congrats (congratulations) about the money you've received today. And it's so nice that you follow a Zumba routine.
Gabica, how does aikido help with your knees? Is it for pains and aches in joints?
Today I went to the Unemployment Office, for the monthly stamping (?) and I enjoy taking the no. 1 tram across Bucharest. It was a long ride, maybe 20 stations for the round trip.
The morning message had some corrections. I will ask for some help from my English half, later tonight.
p.s. for spelling I use an online dictionary (THIS ONE), mainly for the words underlined when I write the message text.
Welcome to our group, Daniela, Gabica and Magda!
Ismi, where are you? I hope you'll find the time to chat, this evening.
Day, congrats (congratulations) about the money you've received today. And it's so nice that you follow a Zumba routine.
Gabica, how does aikido help with your knees? Is it for pains and aches in joints?
Today I went to the Unemployment Office, for the monthly stamping (?) and I enjoy taking the no. 1 tram across Bucharest. It was a long ride, maybe 20 stations for the round trip.
The morning message had some corrections. I will ask for some help from my English half, later tonight.
p.s. for spelling I use an online dictionary (THIS ONE), mainly for the words underlined when I write the message text.
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Good evening, dear ladies! I am surprised to see many of you who found the the time and courage to "expose" themselves here, even though they know they surely make mistakes in writing. I would be very glad to correct you but I use my smartphone to read the forum and I find it difficult to copy and correct...I support and encourage you to continue and if you have the time twrite by hand the correct form of a word and then spell it out loud. Good night to you all, don't give up learning English! You should be admired for your efforts, how many men would have this determination?
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Is not easy for me to follow you.because i must translate and,while i must review my knowlwdge,my mistakes,after your indication Shortly,i need lern after you,those know english better.Now is late,but tomorrow me post will be longer.
Good night,everyone!Bye!!!
I like very much this topic
Good night,everyone!Bye!!!
I like very much this topic
ismi3ismi- Maestru
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Corrections suggested by my husband:
"I said I want this topic too" = I said I wanted this topic, too
"and very good student" = and a very good student
"is the first time when l hear of such a big pressure media put on police" = it's the first time l hear of such a big pressure, media placed on the police
"l wait your help" = I wait for your help
" I need also myself some corrections" = I also need some corrections, myself
"you are beginig yesterday this subject" = you begun this subject yesterday
"welcome to all of us" = welcome to you all
"How are your days going" = how is your day going
"Please, if I do any mistake, try to correct me" = If I make any mistakes, try to correct me, please.
"And l am happy for this" = and I am happy for that
"and new choreography" = and a new choreography
" I will join you verry quiqly" = I will join you very soon
"english by the lake with mud and verry ugly whater" = improper English (but I appreciate the joke )
"I'm work to do" = I have work to do
"to drive my hole new sewing maschine (I but it today)" = to test my brand new sewing machine (I bought it today)
"who it wacthing me saddley by her sewing table" = it just sits there, on the sewing table
"Is it for pains and aches in joints?" = does it solve (lessen) pain in your joints?
"monthly stamping" = monthly stamp
" the message text" = the message
"i need lern after you,those know english better." = I need to learn from those, who know English better
"me post will be longer" = my post will be longer
"I like very much this topic" = I like this topic very much
p.s. a lot of expressions may be said in different ways, but some sound better than others. The dictionary I recommended has a button that gives the audio sound of the English word. Don't be afraid to use it!
[Trebuie sa fiti înscris şi conectat pentru a vedea această imagine]
"I said I want this topic too" = I said I wanted this topic, too
"and very good student" = and a very good student
"is the first time when l hear of such a big pressure media put on police" = it's the first time l hear of such a big pressure, media placed on the police
"l wait your help" = I wait for your help
" I need also myself some corrections" = I also need some corrections, myself
"you are beginig yesterday this subject" = you begun this subject yesterday
"welcome to all of us" = welcome to you all
"How are your days going" = how is your day going
"Please, if I do any mistake, try to correct me" = If I make any mistakes, try to correct me, please.
"And l am happy for this" = and I am happy for that
"and new choreography" = and a new choreography
" I will join you verry quiqly" = I will join you very soon
"english by the lake with mud and verry ugly whater" = improper English (but I appreciate the joke )
"I'm work to do" = I have work to do
"to drive my hole new sewing maschine (I but it today)" = to test my brand new sewing machine (I bought it today)
"who it wacthing me saddley by her sewing table" = it just sits there, on the sewing table
"Is it for pains and aches in joints?" = does it solve (lessen) pain in your joints?
"monthly stamping" = monthly stamp
" the message text" = the message
"i need lern after you,those know english better." = I need to learn from those, who know English better
"me post will be longer" = my post will be longer
"I like very much this topic" = I like this topic very much
p.s. a lot of expressions may be said in different ways, but some sound better than others. The dictionary I recommended has a button that gives the audio sound of the English word. Don't be afraid to use it!
[Trebuie sa fiti înscris şi conectat pentru a vedea această imagine]
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Thank you Admina's hubby!!!! It's great to know that someone,who's actually a native english speaker,is helping us
And Admina,thank you too
Ohh...I almost forgot to say good morning ,ladies and Admina's hubby
And Admina,thank you too
Ohh...I almost forgot to say good morning ,ladies and Admina's hubby
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Ultima editare efectuata de catre ismi3ismi in Mar 18 Feb 2014, 9:15 am, editata de 1 ori
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Re: Let's write in English!
Hi guys!
Thanx a lot Admina and I really appreciate your husband help!
Sometimes I feel like my English doesn't flow, for me it's like a song, must sound nice, or like a river (too noisy??) let's say like a stream...
Alice, when you are free and able to do it, please correct us! I feel sorry we cannot talk also, it could be more helpful.
I'll be back....
Thanx a lot Admina and I really appreciate your husband help!
Sometimes I feel like my English doesn't flow, for me it's like a song, must sound nice, or like a river (too noisy??) let's say like a stream...
Alice, when you are free and able to do it, please correct us! I feel sorry we cannot talk also, it could be more helpful.
I'll be back....
danniela- Atotcunoscător
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[Trebuie sa fiti înscris şi conectat pentru a vedea această imagine]
And a good morning, to you, too! Or I could say a great day, to you, Day!
My hubby is not a native English speaker, actually. He graduated college in the United States and he worked for some companies there. He didn't graduated a language college, so he's not a linguistic expert. But he's as good as it gets! (I hope he'll read this part, too )
Daniela, how do others speak English, in the country you live in? As I sad in an other topic, I think that people outside the UK, US and other English speaking countries, are more relaxed when it comes to English speaking.
And a good morning, to you, too! Or I could say a great day, to you, Day!
My hubby is not a native English speaker, actually. He graduated college in the United States and he worked for some companies there. He didn't graduated a language college, so he's not a linguistic expert. But he's as good as it gets! (I hope he'll read this part, too )
Daniela, how do others speak English, in the country you live in? As I sad in an other topic, I think that people outside the UK, US and other English speaking countries, are more relaxed when it comes to English speaking.
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Hello!I feel like a school!I prupose for my self to learn some words and some expressions for day,and this is work!
Tankyou Admina and your husband for superviser!
Go girls!We can!
Tankyou Admina and your husband for superviser!
Go girls!We can!
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Good morning
Admina, probably because I sitting lot of time in the office and in the car or because of rheumatic pain, i have a pain when I run.
In aikido we do more joint exercises and balance.
Last night I have a strong headache, my daughter work (how I say mărţişoare?) I don't go to training.
It is so hard cu write.
Admina, probably because I sitting lot of time in the office and in the car or because of rheumatic pain, i have a pain when I run.
In aikido we do more joint exercises and balance.
Last night I have a strong headache, my daughter work (how I say mărţişoare?) I don't go to training.
It is so hard cu write.
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